So I'm working on mining my old boot camp exercises for stories again. I already have a mountain of free-writes backed up, but I'll get back to those.
Two camps ago, I did two descriptions a day (a character and a place) using the word of the day from dictionary.com. I decided to take one of each from different words and then apply to the character a series of questions a fellow writer says she uses to design her characters. I thought they were a really neat way to study a person outside-in.
I chose my character desc easily; there's one I really love. From that, I decided I wanted sort of an S&S/action story, and to avoid what might be obvious, an indoor/urban setting. I ended up with the following two:
She was wiry, sparse, a collection of attenuated muscles strung taut over thin bone. One part warrior, one part scarecrow, daubed in the colors of decay: leaf-mold brown hair, turned-earth skin, pallid grey eyes. Most of the time, she kept her head down and her voice soft – but the grave-chill she could summon when roused would daunt even the fiercest of challengers.
The foyer of the estate swept outwards into the main hall, a hardwood-paneled expanse three floors high. Balconies rimmed the chamber, their bars cages around the many doors. Light stabbed down from a single circular window in the ceiling. The marble staircase pooled, the final steps oozing into the floor - which gleamed, pearl-flesh, like a zealous merchant baring his teeth.
At this point, I decided the setting needed three questions to go along with the character. So my questions are:
What are they wearing?
How do they feel about what they are wearing?
What do they have in their pockets (or about their person, ready say, in case of a werewolf attack?)
Who lives here?
How do they feel about it?
What doesn’t fit?
From this, I should be able to get a good spark for a plot ... whoo.
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About Me
- Lindsey Duncan
- I'm a professional harp performer, chef / pastry chef, and speculative fiction writer from Cincinnati, Ohio. My contemporary fantasy novel Flow is available from Double Dragon Publishing, and my science fiction novel Scylla and Charybdis is now out from Grimbold Books. I've also sold a number of short stories and a few pieces of speculative poetry. I write predominantly fantasy, usually epic and/or humorous, with some soft science fiction. I play the traditional lever harp with a specialty in Celtic music - but I also perform modern and Renaissance tunes. And yes, you read that right - I have a diploma in Baking and Pastry and an Associates in Culinary Arts and am currently working in the catering field at Kate's Catering and Personal Chef Services (Dayton, KY). I am a CPC (Certified Pastry Culinarian) and CSW (Certified Specialist of Wine).
3 comments:
First of all, I love the fact your blog is called Unicorn Ramblings, because I am a big time unicorn fan, and my current wip has a uni in it!
And it's so cool how you've expanded the idea to a place! Let us know how this story progresses! I am interested! And I will be adding you to my blogroll... good luck!
I am (well, obviously *grin*) a big fan of unicorns, too, but they haven't made their way into my novels recently. Guess they're just waiting for the right place ...
Thanks! I have as many places as people, so it seemed like a good idea to use one, too.
I'll add you to mine as soon as I can figure the dratted thing out. Sometimes I am technologically handicapped. ;-)
*smile* It's good to see we're inspiring and helping each other.
Adzmodeus is good at helping with challenging tech things. *wink*
Diana/Bunny
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